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Wednesday, 12 October 2016

My poem

                                         OPEN A BOOK
Open a book and you will see people learning
                         Peacefully
      the page and you will see people         
                            creating
                         beautifully
    Close the book and you will hear people                  
                Sharing successfully


                        THE END          
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  1. Anonymous22 August 2017 at 10:56

    hi kellyann i am a year 7 student from Edmund Hillary School i think that your blog post i really liked how short and sweet it was really good i like what you've done keep it up. If you wanna comment on my blog click the link http://edhillsamsonm.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Anonymous23 August 2017 at 13:59

    Kia ora Kellyann, My name is Gerhard and I work for the Ako Hiko Cluster in Mt Roskill.
    Thanks for sharing your poem, I like the way that it flows. Did you follow a particular form of poetry, or is it a freeform poem? I always find that poems are really powerful if they are read by the author. Maybe next time you could record and share yourself reading the poem.

    Thanks for sharing and keep it up!
    Gerhard

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